Now, keep in mind that I don't love the whole thing overall, but there are a few lines that I like and just might pull out of there and start something new. I like the way, "careful to a fault, reckless to precision" sounds. It brings to mind a very different image. But, if in nine lines I found one that spurs on something bigger and better, this exercise can be called a success. BAM!
(Correction: sigh...line 7...*may be plain....this is what happens when you try to make things purty and argue with your child simultaneously.)
|"Capricorn". Copyright - Jennifer Klein. 2012.|